shayragarciaa

Chapter 1 of my new story is up! Let me know what you all think

thelifeofj00

where is the sequel of the book my neighbour like what happened to zander? 
          please reply!!
          i really enjoyed the book ☺

shayragarciaa

@JoanneB03 It's called "Save me from myself", you can find it on my page. Thanks!! :)
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shayragarciaa

@JoanneB03 It's called "Save me from myself", you can find it on my page. Thank you!! :)
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karilyn24

Hello my name is karilyn and I just wanna tell u how amazing ur story my neighbor is amazing and I can't wait to finish and read ur others keep up the good work ❤️ 

karilyn24

Also you are very pretty and I love your name  
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shayragarciaa

Hi! Thank you so much I'm so glad you liked it❤️❤️
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Ayayafi05

Hii how are you ??
          I just want to tell you how i decided to read your stories. So today when i was at school i had like 5 or 6 lessons free after the 3rd lesson i got soo bored so i looked at wattpad at a complete stories and when i foun them i decided i will read them no matter what and after a while tge principel came and took my phone baut i managed to take it back after 15 min. And now when i calculated the hours that i spend on reading them i found out it took me 2 h and 55 min  and by the way i love your stories soo muchhh ❤❤❤

shayragarciaa

Awww thank you! I barely saw this.. A month later haha but I'm so glad you liked my stories. Don't get caught on your phone that's bad! Haha thank you for your support❤️
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jujusaidy

Hey!
          Youre really creative..your stories are amazing! 
          You just need to work on your Paragraphs- everytime a different person talks, you need to put it in a next line not the same paragraph
          And dialogue tags- instead of using "said" try replacing them with "replied", "agreed", "asked", "mumbled", etc
          
          Other that that..its good keep it up
          Looking forward to reading more of your books
          Goodluck