I think the most recent chapter was really good. both versions of it were amazing but I really like what you did to change it and like you said, you can do so much more with what you changed. I'm very excited for what happens next!
Thinking about making a valentine's day one shot because I'm unoriginal and I have nothing better to do than write. If any of you people are interested in this idea then let me know and I'll get started on it right away.