sheri72

Please take a minute and read the first chapter of my book.  I am super excited about it. Any feed back would be great. https://www.wattpad.com/story/62051904

A group of friends, divided by love, witchcraft and death. https://www.wattpad.com/story/62051904

Hey fellow writers and readers, I am in the first draft of my book. It is a little sloppy and of course I will go back and fix what ever needs to be done. I would like anyone to read the first chapter, give me feed back, Good or bad. Please don't be to mean, it my first time writing and I need help.
          Thanks for your support. #The Holy One -Moon Witch

I need some help on how to get all my ideas and story line together. I also need help on how to switch from one character to another. Please help. Thanks!!!

Please check out the first couple of chapters of my book. First time writer. I need feedback. Thanks

Please read what I have posted,feedback is needed and appriciated.
          Thanks!!