sheriffcolie

Hey. Wassup my dudes? I've been MIA for a while cause school literally hates my guts. Needless to say, I've started a new book, "Oliver Thyme and the Court of Sorcerers". Be sure to check it out! Updates every two weeks on Friday!

sheriffcolie

Hey. Wassup my dudes? I've been MIA for a while cause school literally hates my guts. Needless to say, I've started a new book, "Oliver Thyme and the Court of Sorcerers". Be sure to check it out! Updates every two weeks on Friday!

scifiwriter

Hi! Thank you so much for reading Enhancement a little while ago. Sorry for saying thanks so late to the party. I should be more on top of these types of things :)
          
          If you're interested (and I feel so hypocritical and strange for asking, trust me!) I have a new short story for a contest posted. I'd be flattered if you checked it out and left your opinions. If you enjoy, a vote on chapter one will help me advance!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/257348353-the-prom-prince-onceuponnow-%E2%9C%A7-1-%E2%9C%A7
          
          Thank you again! And by the way, ahahh, I love your bio! At first I thought it was referring to people who DO read, not don't, and I got so freaked out.
          
          PS: I did a project in elementary school about Utah, and I really want to go out there some day! Any opinions/tips/recommendations?

sheriffcolie

I will definitely check out your short story! It looks really good! Utah is a really amazing place and it's a great spot for a vacation. If you really want to get the Old West Utah feel, I would recommend visiting Kanab. It's fun and close to a lot of state and National parks! Hope I'm not sounding too much like a tour guide ! 
Reply

sheriffcolie

VERY IMPORTANT!!!! READ!!!
          
          ALRIGHT!!!! It is finally up! The final version of Utopians is done and uploaded!!! I strongly suggest that you read the whole thing over again just because the story will flow better for you, but if you really don't want to, here are the chapters that contain the major changes that you need to know about: 
          
          The prologue
          3
          7
          12
          13
          14
          the last paragraph of 15
          only Alvin's POV in 16
          17
          20
          22
          23
          30
          31
          33
          
          Again!!!! I really think that it would be beneficial to you to read the whole book, but it is up to you.

sheriffcolie

The LAST (I promise) version of Utopians will be posted ON THIS PROFILE by the end of the school year this year (so early June). LETS GET EXCITED!!! And about the edits that I am doing. I'm not just doin' some grammar and spelling checks, I am adding POV's that weren't in there in the first book, A WHOLE NEW CHARACTER WOOHOO, and a bunch of other cool stuff! Can't wait until you guys can read it!

sheriffcolie

Hey guys. I've been thinking of a way to tell you all how much I appreciate all of the follows, votes, views, etc. and here's what I'm gonna do. If you have a book that you've written and would like me to read, PM me the info! I'll read it and (if you want me to) I will give you some feedback on it! Just some friendly author advise, but if not, I'll simply read it and vote! This offer is open until the en of March so HURRY! 

sheriffcolie

Okay, so as most of you know, Utopians Book One is finished on here and I am currently editing it on a word document. When I am finished with this, I will replace the chapters on here with the new ones. For my reader's convenience, I will notify you all of chapters in which major changes have been made so you won't have to miss out on the story or read it all over again.