Hey, I am a newbie writer. I have written blogs on various issues. But this is my first shot at detailed descriptive writing. So I am gonna need suggestions to improve as well as criticism that is helpful.
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sherjeelmalik
Mar 17, 2016 11:37AM
Hey, I am a newbie writer. I have written blogs etc. But this is my first shot at written detailed writing. So any sugesstions, criticisms are welcomed. Help me get better at thisView all Conversations
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City Of Saints
Trying to escape the gore world of gang wars in Brazil, Andre looks to set a better life in the States with h...