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@KrystlePerry8 thank you so much!

@TheInsaneTwin225 Thank you so much for the advice, i try to keep things spiced up, so i thank you so much and for reading my story, if you could, could you help advertise my story, im trying to get it out there. You dont have to do it, but thank you so much for the advice

@TheInsaneTwin225 I love your story though! A masochist story of someone who takes a beating is pretty unique.

@TheInsaneTwin225 I love the 1st Person POV, but try not to use the word “You” and “Your” too often. Hopefully it’s ok, but I took a section of your story and rewrote it.
            Your Version:
            It just fuels yourself more and you stand straight up again. Giving your infamous insane smile again before he punches you in the gut, the wonderful bliss blossoming in your abdomen. You hold your stomach as your cry to slightly stand back and continue giving him your smile.
            
            Updated Version:
            Becoming increasingly fueled you begin to stand up straight, smiling insanely before being punch in the gut. The pain blossoming in your abdomen is pure bliss as you grip your stomach fighting back tears while the infamous smile remains.

@shescoy thank you so much, I hope you have an amazing day ❤️

@xx_droyalty_xx absolutely. 

@xx_droyalty_xx it's no problem and I love your book. Yes I do write I'm currently working on something that is yet to published and I have the copyright chapter for my first book on my twin account @__droylaty__ of you want to check it out

This just made my day.

Wow. And THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR CHECKING OUT MY BOOK❤️

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Yea, some parts seem extreme, but truth is stranger than fiction. The guy from RED actually follows me in Wattpad and so does the one from SLUT. I won't give a name, but there's more truth than people Believe. It's cool though. There's only a few of us that know the full stories. Lol. I noticed a lot of my readers are actually from India which is Amazing. I never thought my stories would reach that far! 

Okay...So I'm from a fairly conservative country, India, especially the part I live in. And 90% of the adult here have only ever had sex for giving birth and stuff and so sex is just a pretty awkward thing too talk about.
            But the fact that can be so intense and varied is just amazing. 
            And so I'm sorry for sounding ignorant, but I have an awkward question. As much as I enjoyed it, I couldn't imagine that almost any part of your books can happen in real life. But you said in your bio that some of it was based on real life experience. So, like holy fuck, really?!?!
            Again, I'm so sorry if I sound really ignorant. I probably am.