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What's your youtube channel name 

Hey I read your story and voted it here is my honest review 
           
          Actually I never really read korean stories cause I am not interested.but your story is quite interesting - like why is that class mate is murdered ? Who might be the suspect ? Why is one class mate behaving bad to her  ? What happened in her past ? 
          
          Here are some areas that you can improve ✨
          Spelling and grammar mistakes.these are minor so you can improve quickly. 
          
          Now your turn 
          

Hey by the way,  do you write somewhere else or are you practicing here first ?

Hi there 
          Thanks for following, by the way did u check out my stories,?