Eram432

Hi there dear! I have just begun writing and am super nervous about it. Would you be kind enough to check out my book? 
          
          Please leave a like if you enjoyed! 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376629250?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Eram432

Eram432

@Eram432 Hi there darl! I'm so happy to get this long review, really I am! 
            
            I start every chapter with third person POV/ author's POV so I didn't feel the need to mention the POV's! I will, however, keep this in mind and will clarify. While writing, Levita was supposed to be a sinister character but somehow she is better than what I had originally imagined. Anna, however, is characterized to be a little doomed! 
            
            Again, I seriously am very grateful for your feedback!
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shimmer54

@Eram432 i read ur novel.
            What i like - the story line is gripping, its suspensefull, character description are good, the writing is good
            
            What could be changed- 
            If u start the chapter with writing the name of person so that we can come to know whose pov we are reading.
            
            So thats it, so far its good, and ur story seems promising and i hope ur story  turn out to be different then rest.
            I hope in ur story we see that FL will become strong n fight back and even the OW levita will become her best friend n help her grow, and this FL will get her happy ending with her lord.
            
            Looking frward to ur story. Keep writing
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_SmilyVi

Hello! I'm the author of the book "Threads of Destiny" on Wattpad. I would be grateful if you could give my book a chance to read and provide your review. Your feedback will help attract other readers as well. Thank you!
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/354146345?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_SmilyVi

_SmilyVi

@_SmilyVi  Thankyou so much
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shimmer54

@_SmilyVi the storyline is good, its intresting, its sweet romcom.
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Etoile_Filante03

A sincere thank you for voting on my book "Broken Rings." Your vote is more than a click, it's a beautiful gesture of love and support, reassuring me that I'm doing well with every chapter. Your encouragement means the world to me. Thank you so much for being a part of this journey.
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