VitoriPotter16

Yes, please, great idea. It would be fantastic to see a chapter of how Epheotus reacts to Arthur and Sylvie, especially Arthur. See the spears, Bairon and how he is dealing with the betrayal. Alacrya and the way Agrona is acting. When will Chul show up? Will Lady Dawn's fate change?

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 Chul will make an appearence.
            
            As for Lady Dawm, I still not 100% sure on what to do with her. Wheter she lives or dies is irrelevant to the ending so I'll decide when her character is relevent.
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VitoriPotter16

What do the other Asuras besides Kezess, Myre, the Eight Greats, and others know about Arthur? Like, do they know he's a human with the body and legacy of a dragon? What were you telling Kodri and the Mapellia clan teachers, the young Asuras, and the castle servants? This adoption proposal, will they bring this up again at some point toward the end of the training in Epheotus?

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 good questions, these will definitely be adressed in future chapters and I'm considering having a chapter just to show how Epheotus as hole reacts to Arthur and Sylvie, but later on in the story. Right now there are things I want to cover like what the Lances are doing or what is going on in Alacrya. Hopefully that will be just as interesting.
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VitoriPotter16

Will Arthur reveal more of his abilities to Kezess? The Aether Blade or Aroa's Requiem? Maybe something else? Will Arthur learn to make portals like Sylvia did? Or pocket dimensions, like the one he uses in the fight against Cadell and Nico? Or does he already know how to do that, I'm not sure.

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 That would be going into spoiler territory, so you will just have to wait and see.
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VitoriPotter16

Hi, amazing chapter, Arthur and Kezess' training was very interesting to watch. I laughed so much at the way Arthur trained, running around the room with Kezess swinging a mana-enhanced staff (laugh).
          
          Although I'm a little confused, is Kezess' training similar to the training Myre gave Arthur in the original line? Maybe there are some differences? If so, I wonder which was the hardest training for Arthur. Or maybe it's Google Translate, I'm not sure.
          
          Seele really enjoyed this training. Kezess seems to have had a lot of fun watching this part of the training. It makes me curious about what the training with the Indrath clan warriors will be like. Will they see a little of Arthur's Aether manipulation and what will their reaction be when they see it?
          
          It seems that Kezess will train Arthur a little more when he returns from training with the Mapellia clan. Although I think he is also quite curious about this Aether art. I have a question, I don't remember exactly, but what is Kezess and Sylvia's branch of Aether? I thought Sylvia was from the Time branch and Kezess from the Space branch? I'm confused.

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 Glad you enjoyed the chapeter.
            
            Kezess training incorporated some of what Myre taught Arthur, just in a different way. I might edit the chapter to make that more clear or expand upon in the future.
            
            As for training with the Indrath clan warriors, now that Arthur has revealed he can use more arts than what Sylvia's will granted, Kezess will push Arthur to learn to use then in real battle.
            
            If I'm remembering things right, Syliva is from the spatium branch while Kezess affinity has yet to be revealed. But you should probaly check the wiki, it should have the answer.
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VitoriPotter16

Will we get Kezess or Myre's POV at some point? Will we see Myre and Arthur's POV of their conversation in Xirus?

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 There will definitely be more POVs from Kezess and Myre at some point.
            
            And the conversation in Xyrus has alredy been adressed so I don't see the need to make another call back to that.
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VitoriPotter16

This chapter was fantastic, especially because if I'm not mistaken Arthur uses Aether as a reinforcement (combat). So seeing him learn a different way to use Aether is interesting, will there be a few more chapters focused on Arthur's training? At some point we'll see Kezess' thoughts on Arthur and Sylvie. His training, what he thinks about Arthur's Aether manipulation. Kezess talking to someone about it. Since Arthur will reveal a little about the extent of his abilities. Will we see Aether combat training between Arthur and Kezess at some point? (Or will there only be manipulation training?) Kazess will learn some things about Aether manipulation. (Will Arthur talk about it or will it just be Kezess observing Arthur?). Thanks for the chapter.

shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 thanks for the feedback.
            
            I'm not enterly sure how many chapters this training will take, but it shouldn't strecht for too long.
            
            As for combat training, there won't be, sort of. Like Kezess said, this whole thing is for Arthur to learn how to use the abilities he got from Sylvia's will and the one he got as his first phase instead of static void was somtrhing like force cancelling(chapter 13, paragraph 7). And do you think Kezess will consider the best way to train that? Trail by fire, of course.
            
            And the old lizard will definitely be learning somthing new from Arthur, he wasn't kepping an eye on our boy for nothing.
            
            Thanks for reading so far and I hope you enjoy what is to come.
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VitoriPotter16

This chapter was very interesting. Sylvie's POV is always good to see. Her thoughts on Kezess and how he is acting differently than expected. And how he is keeping an eye on Arthur. He shows concern for her, his granddaughter. Did he also show concern for Arthur? Or am I wrong.
          
          Sylvie must be very worried about Arthur, while he is training with Kezess. If the next chapter will be Arthur's POV, it will be interesting to see what the dynamic between the two of them will be like, while Kezess is training Arthur.
          
          Mainly Arthur will have to reveal a little about his use of the Aether Arts to Kezess. He can't reveal too much, but not too little either. Arthur wants to keep Kezess interested in him.
          
          I wonder if Arthur will meet Taci. It would be an interesting meeting to see. Especially because I don't think any of the young Asuras have been informed about Arthur. I also think they may sense that Arthur is not a complete Asura. Maybe? Mainly because last time, Arthur killed Taci. And Taci is very arrogant, just like Lucas.
          
          Anyway, thanks for the chapter, sorry for bothering you.

VitoriPotter16

Thank you very much for your reply.
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shin_mori

@VitoriPotter16 thanks for the feedback man, really apreciate it.
            
            I won't say much about where the story is going, only that Taci will show up in the near future, and like I said in a previus reply to you, the Taci situation is going to be MAD different.
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