shipper_choni

shipper_choni

Pls write ur opinion about my stories 
          Be honest

HKAdams

@shipper_choni All you need to work on is timing and grammar. <3. Onward and upward. 
            Hey, while you're at it, why don't ya take a look at Dusk Harbor 1999? 
            I could use some reviews as well.
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Ryufath

Well so far i have read them, they are all well written and the context is good. Probably the only thing i suggest to improve is your time and word management so readers can enjoy :-)
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