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@daisyythv thankyou so much for taking it as a constructive criticism and not getting mad at me! I will give it another chance when you are done with it!
            All the best!!

@shirley6305 hey, thank you for being honest. i really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts. i didn’t use ai for the story, but i understand what you mean about the pacing and timeline — some parts might’ve felt a bit rushed compared to what i had in mind and i messed up the time frame quite a few times. i’m already working on slowing things down and adding more emotional depth. thanks again for pointing it out ♡ i've alr started re-editing. 
            

@daisyythv i genuinely loved your first story and tried to read the ice Prince one. The reason i can't complete is because of a lot of ai tone in the story. I don't mean to assume you have used it but it just feels like a ai generated story. I am sorry but i really feel there is a lack of emotion or the time frame just does not add up sometimes.

thank you soo much :) 

@Moonlitrosette will do 

@shirley6305 says the link is expired 

@shirley6305 thanks

@Izzy20102024 will send a new link then it will be uploaded on the message board above okay join through that 

@shirley6305 it says the link has expired and to join through a new link

@shirley6305 sure darling text me kn telegram @beanablle

@Hgodess yes yes but how do we? Also.can we do it next month.....i had a lot of stuff of buy for this one 

@shirley6305 are we buying?

@shirley6305 I have a A/N up on my account now!

@yearningoleander suree I would love to give it a try!! What trope is it? 

@starryxshine love I am sorry but I don't read straight books 

@Hgodess I put a post with discord server please join 

@Brokenhumour01 https://discord.gg/RAzBXyHP

@Brokenhumour01 Haven't made it yet let me share