Lysander 👌

Hey straight male on Wattpad, I'd like to sweep you off your feet 

Hi- Plzzzz UPDATE. I don’t wanna bother u if ur busy but I want one!! 

HEYYO! Been a while huh? I just got to reading your story, (wanted to hold off on reading it until it was completed, less painful that way), but I lost patience since I haven't gotten any notifications about updates. Please do update. If you like writing your story then by all means continue! It's alright if your busy or something, just wanted to make sure you don't quite for...whatever reason. I really want to find out what's gonna happen. I mean, c'mon, you left me at a cliff hanger!!
          Nice job tho, srsly. Just posting this cos I think you story's worth continuing.

damn. u might be the first and only male user i have ever met/seen/whatever-u-call-this on wattpad thus far. XD No joke on the endangered species thing.
          Good luck for whatever you try!

I just finished reading wolf in human's clothing and j loved it, your good at writing but I think you need to capture those senses more. I know you added some sort of sense if smell but try to use all the senses what do the characters physically feel? What do they see? Smell? Taste? What emotions are being caused because of those senses. I think it will help improve your detail and help the readers such as myself feel more of a connection with the characters. 
          
          Also just to be clear I'm telling you this to improve your writing and get it to be the best version it can be. You don't have to take any of the advice but it's there if you do use it. Sending love ❤️❤️❤️