nissi

Hey lovely,
          Keep up the good work! You have great dialogue and interesting plot. My main suggestion is you go into more depth with characters at the beginning of the book, specifically Y/N. I like the description/background you provided in the first chapter, but a good technique you can use in the future is instead of info dumping in the first chapter, integrate the information as you get to know the character, if that makes any sense. Info dumping is tricky to use as a hooker for your book, especially on wattpad.
          Your writing otherwise has lots of great skill and potential! ❤️

Thank you so much for voting my story. I'm glad you are enjoying the read 

Hey there!!
          I was wondering if you could give my book called Blood Moon Rising a shot? If you're interested in sinking your teeth into hot vampires, feisty heroines, deadly town secrets, and lots of drama (maybe an apocalypse eek!), then you might want to consider checking this out!
          Here's the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/158908363-blood-moon-rising
          
          However, you're free to decline.
          But, if you do, let me know your thoughts in the comments. 
          Have a great day ☺️❤️