I'd just like to say that your Fan Fiction is so unique and impressive. You have talent in writing and that talent keeps the reader hooked. When I am reading some Fairy Tail fan fiction I usually get disappointed with people not following the character traits, you however make it real. It actually felt like this was apart of the Fairy Tail Series. I liked how you didn't escalate quickly with love relationships (that some do,) You build up the relationship making the reader stay hooked until the very end. Believe me, other fan fictions were like "Oh my god I think I am in love," on like the first chapter, so I was disappointed and bored already. I like seeing the relationships build up. Also I hope you make a part two of your book or another story :)