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I would like to provide some feedback on your story "Valiant," as I believe there are areas for improvement.
          
          The prologue of "Valiant" was exceptionally well-written and captured my interest immediately. However, as the story progressed, I found that it lost some of its initial appeal and felt somewhat lackluster. Additionally, certain scenes, such as the one where the protagonist stands up to the bully, appeared to be written with less polish and depth compared to the prologue.
          
          The writing style in these sections seemed more juvenile, akin to the work of a younger writer. Nonetheless, I appreciate your efforts and hope my feedback is helpful for your future revisions.
          
          <3

Chapter two of ‘The Darkness We Hide’ is out now! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1517640006?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=shortyywrites

Heyy! Thank you sooo much for adding The Mystery Of Eastbrooks High and Beneath The Blackwood Sky to your reading list, it means a lot to me! Have a great day <3333

Do you want to join our community. 

Chapter one of ‘The Darkness We Hide.’ Is out!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1358421396?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=shortyywrites

Hello! We've been paired again. I was wondering if you could read 3 chapters of the WTBC first and then we'll read the next two for the other club;)
          Thanks! 

Salaar’s gaze, which had lingered on her trembling form, shifted to her face. The intensity in his eyes dimmed as he met hers, filled with icy disdain.
          
           
          
          "I thought you would be happy that I married you and loved you," Salaar said, shocked by her response and her despising him.
          
           
          
          "Happy?" She smirked with cold eyes.
          
          "Of course, I am so lucky. The great Salaar Malik took an ordinary girl like Zarmeena Khan into his marriage. So what should I do? Vow to spend my whole life as your maid or worship you by falling at your feet?" The lava ignited within her found its way to burn Salaar into ashes.
          
           
          
          "I am Zarmeena Khan. I will make you pay for everything you snatched from me, my family, my dreams, and my life. You messed with your own destruction Salaar Malik" She finished, glaring at him, and tossed the beautifully wrapped gift into the dustbin.
          
          Read a beautiful story of love and Heart 
          
          (Prefrence Delights) 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376182667?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=VerticalEdge74
          
          

Hi! I love your theme!

Hey! I hope you’re having a great day! Sorry for dropping this on your message board, but I’d love for you to check out my story “The Bad Boy’s Influence”. It’s about Adeline Rosario, a girl with a seemingly perfect life turned upside down after one reckless night. Now, she’s navigating her senior year numb and disconnected—until she meets Will, charming and dangerous, who pulls her into a world she’s not sure she can handle. If you’re into raw emotions, complicated pasts, and a bit of chaos with lots of drama, I think you’ll enjoy it. Let me know what you think if you give it a shot! <333
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387242915?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=-420jk

Gentle Reader,
          Everyone likes a good love story...
          Can you give some precious moments of yours to read my first story. I hope you will tell me how it is once you read it.
          I sincerely appreciate your support and feedback.
          Thank you.
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377116417?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=rose2q4e