MoonAura_drift

hi author diya 
          i'm a new writer 
          can you please read my book and give me feed back where to improve 
          it will be really big help for me 
          cuz i want to improve my writing .. and wanna know where can i 
          thank you>>
          waiting for your reply>>>

MoonAura_drift

@Diya_12Solanki I’d actually love that. Thank you so much for the suggestion and for appreciating my work. I’m definitely open to collaborating in the future.
            If you’re comfortable, we can talk on Instagram. Let’s write a wonderful novel together ✨
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shree_diya

@MoonAura_drift Maybe this comes out weird but in the future if you ever want to Collab and write a story, just message me..... I'll really appreciate it. I have a lot to share.........just a suggestion.
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MoonAura_drift

Not offended at all  Thank you so much for such honest and thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to point this out. I understand what you mean about pacing, and I’ll definitely work on slowing things down and adding more depth before the emotional reveals. Your message actually helps a lot. Thank you again, and I truly appreciate your support 
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lovingheart_writes

Hi
          I hope I’m not intruding — I just wanted to share a little story I’ve poured a lot into: “Behind the Silence – A Love Story Beyond Words.”
          It’s not your typical romance — it’s quiet, emotional.
          
          If you love reading stories that feel personal and intimate, I’d be truly grateful if you gave it a shot. And if you ever feel like leaving a review, even a word — I’d appreciate it more than you know.
          
          I'm honestly just hoping it reaches people who feel stories deeply — and maybe you’re one of them. Would you be open to reading and maybe sharing your honest thoughts?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391301350?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=lovingheart040203