Hey, I love your ideas for your stories and how you adapt them to fanfiction but I think your writing needs to have more impactful and emotional. Grammar, punctuation, spelling and style will improve if you keep reading and writing. Your plot, the twists and turns along with the writing will get you an eternal ticket to the hall of fame if your story wrenches your reader's heart until they don't know whether to laugh or cry. And don't be afraid to describe in depth as long as it's effective and necessary, flesh your characters out and make them in a way so that people root for them and at times don't know if they're the bad guy or the good guy, and if the future if you find yourself writing a line that's been said a million times before, probably don't write it.
You're on a path to being an amazing writer. I hope you know it. For now, don't stop writing and experiment. Good luck ;)
