primpetal
Hey umm would you mind if I ask you how you find my story consumed by his obsession?
shweta1dalal
@primpetal ya its fine but just a suggestion that in a chapter if you are writing flashback let the whole chapter be in flashback and if the chapter is in present then let the whole chapter be in present
primpetal
@shweta1dalal what if I remove the flashback part writing it simply like she chooses second option instead of showing it in flashback. Will it remove the confusion?
