primpetal

Hey umm would you mind if I ask you how you find my story consumed by his obsession?

shweta1dalal

@primpetal and thankyou for considering my suggestion
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shweta1dalal

@primpetal ya its fine but just a suggestion that in a chapter if you are writing flashback let the whole chapter be in flashback and if the chapter is in present then let the whole chapter be in present
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primpetal

@shweta1dalal what if I remove the flashback part writing it simply like she chooses second option instead of showing it in flashback.  Will it remove the confusion?
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