Hey, I hope you didn't regret it in the end! And I wanted to tell you that I've started reading your story, as you will see in the notifications, but, aside from that, I wanted to tell you that I enjoy it up until now just you should be a bit careful with when you're changing a paragraph when a character is speaking because once someone's dialogue/description of what his doing/how his voice was and all that changes then you should also change paragraph to move to the next one, otherwise it's a bit confusing. I would have said it in the comments section in one of your chapters but I didn't want to appear rude or something like that and I really hope I don't do that too as well just I wanted to help you and because you did the same to my story and it helped a lot I wanted to do the same and I spotted a few more mistakes but it's nothing to worry about and I'll stop now because I actually sound rude and harsh but anyway, if you want any help I would love to, not to sound more experienced or something like that but you know. Anyway, really enjoying your story so far so keep it up!!!!
