shyqwern

          	Hey, sorry I haven't been able to update! I've been super busy with work lately. I'm not sure when I'll have time, but I promise I'll get an update out as soon as I can.
          	
          	
          	I even wrote a 2000-word chapter, but when I looked at it again, it just felt like something was off. So, I'm going to rewrite it.
          	

gimmi00

Part I: The Fall (Chapters 1–10)
          
          1. Childhood Promises
          Arnav and Zara’s innocent friendship blossoms into young love.
          Ekansh is the teasing elder brother but supportive.
          
          
          2. Terrace Laughter
          The terrace scene: Arnav's accident unfolds.A photo of Zara. A chase. A fall. A life changed.
          
          3. Waking Pain
          Arnav wakes in a hospital, paralyzed.
          The beginning of silence between them.
          
          4. Her Silent Devotion
          Zara becomes his nurse, guardian, and anchor.
          Emotional and physical intimacy builds (non-sexual, but very close).
          Hint of adult care: including feeding, bathing.
          
          5. The Broken Mirror
          Arnav starts distancing emotionally.
          Self-worth erodes.
          
          6. Father’s Ultimatum
          Zara’s father gives the devastating speech to Arnav.
          A man’s pride clashes with love.
          
          7. The Lie
          Arnav breaks Zara with the words: “I don’t love you anymore.”
          
          8. Departure
          Zara leaves. She doesn't cry. Not in front of him.Arnav watches her go. Alone.
          
          9. Ekansh’s Guilt
          Ekansh confronts his role in the accident.
          His brother won’t talk about it.
          
          10. The Hollow Years
          A time skip montage-style chapter.
          Zara builds a name. Arnav disappears from the world. 
          
          (Nervously 
          )

shyqwern

@gimmi00 I will add everything as you mention above .
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shyqwern

@gimmi00 thanks for understanding me , and I will do some major or minor change in your story line , and also want to ask , if you don't mind can I change male lead name , as the name you suggest used in most of novels 
          
          
          Just asking , if you don't want I will go according to you

gimmi00

Hiii author ji
          Aapki book 'his baby' bahut achhi hai.♥️
          Aap dark romance ki koi new book likhengi?
          Aapki telegram ya insta I'd kya hai? 
          
          
          
          
          

gimmi00

Author ji,
            First of all, I liked this storyline very much, which is why I suggested it to you.
            Please write the story in your own way
             (I just want to suggest a few things — like the story should be a bit longer, there should be a breastfeeding scene, the mature scenes should have a bit more detail, and the male lead should be a bit more possessive. These are just my suggestions — the rest is completely up to you, please write it as you wish).
            Kuch jayda ho gya kya?
            
            
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gimmi00

@gimmi00 No problem.
            I'll wait until the story begins.
            Best of luck author ji ♥️
            
            
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shyqwern

          Hey, sorry I haven't been able to update! I've been super busy with work lately. I'm not sure when I'll have time, but I promise I'll get an update out as soon as I can.
          
          
          I even wrote a 2000-word chapter, but when I looked at it again, it just felt like something was off. So, I'm going to rewrite it.