As my comment is not gettingpostedin chapteri I am writing this here.
@GSmeangirl The story's disclaimer clearly states it is "a work of fiction" exploring "moral corruption, psychological seduction, emotional breakdowns" and "morally complex" themes. Its purpose is not to be a clinical case study for a psychiatric textbook. It's a dark romance exploring the psychology of its characters.
Your comment's betrays a fundamental misunderstanding of both the story's genre and the medical realities it touches upon, and it looks like you seem to have conveniently overlooked the @thamepogirlie author's direct response to you.Your assertion that a character developing schizophrenia in their late twenties is not true is demonstrably false as sevaral medical studies confirms that. While men often present earlier, late-onset cases are well-documented across both sexes.
Furthermore, you also claim the condition being non-hereditary is impossible. This is factually incorrect. According to European Journal of Human Genetics , while genetics play a role, over 83% of schizophrenia cases are sporadic, meaning they occur in individuals with no affected first, second, or third-degree relatives . The disease is a complex interplay of diverse factors, not a simple inheritance pattern. Your criticism is based on a misconception, not complex medical reality.
Attacking the storyline credibility based on your own incorrect assumptions is not constructive criticism, it's just ignorant and rude.
There is no shame in not knowing something ,none of us are experts on everything. The shame lies not in ignorance, but in refusing to update one's understanding when new facts are presented. A willingness to learn is what separates genuine discussion from dismissive noise. I hope you'll take this as an opportunity to reflect but the facts and research studies, as they say, speaks for itself.
