krispypencil

Hey once again it’s been a while just wanted to check in to see how you are doing whether you are having a good holiday season and curious about how the next chapter is coming along. Hope you’re doing well and hope you had a happy thanksgiving 

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey buddy, it has been a while. I've been doing alright, thanks and how about you? 
            
            The next chapter's outline has been done for a while but I just couldn't focus on it because of other problems I had to deal with. Thankfully, some of it has been dealt with and now that I can relax a little, I can put more focus onto writing the next chapter. There's a lot that needs to be said so it'll probably have many things happening so I don't know when it'll get done. My goal is to have it posted before the end of this month. 
            
            Also, when should I expect some more thought provoking discussions from ya? haha
            
            Thanks for checking in, I appreciate it and I did have Thanksgiving dinner with family so it went well. 
            
            I know you mentioned you're at college, so how's that going? And did you celebrate Thanksgiving too? 
            
            Hope all is well with ya and till next time.
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krispypencil

Hey it’s been a solid while but I read your latest chapter when it dropped on patreon. Sorry I couldn’t write to you earlier, university is hitting in full force and life is coming at me from multiple sides but I’ve been looking forward to your chapter uploads non stop.
          
          I can’t get enough of your version of eri and midoriya’s relationship it really hammers home just how much she’s been through and how badly she needs a pillar in her life. Even seeing nagant be affected by their relationship was an indicator on the strength of izuku and Eri’s relationship.
          
          I’m looking forward to the next chapter which is presumably when the parents get involved 
          

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey man, it's been a while, glad to hear from ya. 
            
            No worries buddy, I gotcha. University can be tough and that's not even counting all the other stuff that life can throw our way. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for ya buddy just like you support me in my writing.  
            
            Glad you liked it and wanted to show their relationship growing to actually be a father/daughter type. Kids are resilient and can bounce back quickly, but it still takes some time. 
            
            Next chapter is gonna have several things going on that will build current plots while also adding a few more. I think after a couple more chapters, I'm gonna start moving the story along faster (time wise) because it'll have the foundations properly built by then. 
            
            Hope all is well buddy and to hear from ya again
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krispypencil

Read the latest chapter on patreon and it was great! I certainly didn’t expect things to unfold as drastically as they did. I expected him to keep that much a secret but this izuku is more brave and secure about himself. It’s refreshing really. It’ll be interesting to see what happens when bakugo comes back, and seeing monoma be dealt with before things get to bad with him is a good move on Izuku’s part, since the most effective method to do so would’ve just been to tell the truth or as much of the truth he could tell without including one for all. Also side note seeing ochako and momo bonding was a great scene. One thing I’m looking forward to is the guy’s reaction to this since they’ve been pretty petty throughout his time at UA, but I can see some of them still refusing to accept it as the truth. It was a pleasant and dramatic twist from what I thought was going to be him keeping his past a secret and I’m certainly looking forward to what happens next.

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Good dude, have fun and enjoy! 
            
            Things are going well and getting some good writing in. Thanks and same to you!
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krispypencil

Yeah I’m in India right now with family I’ll be here for 2-3 weeks and then I head back to London. Things are going well but I have course work from my university which I have to do during the break, it’s been enjoyable so far and reading your latest chapter made it even better, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter. How are things going with you? I hope you’re having a good and enjoyable summer and that you are getting plenty of rest and relaxation 
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silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey buddy, glad to hear you liked it. 
            
            Yeah, I never did like Izuku hiding where he's coming from. And this was a good way to bring it out into the open in a way that is realistic and stays true to their characters even with how much Izuku has grown. 
            
            Katsuki coming back next week and dealing with his aftermath is gonna be fun to write cause what I have in store will be part of karma coming back to bite him but will he learn or not and change, is the question. 
            
            Yeah, I liked that scene too with Momo and Ochaco. You don't see many decent stories with those two as good friends so hopefully this will be one of them. But don't worry, I haven't forgotten about their old friends Kyoka and Tsuyu. They're important too. 
            
            The guys' reactions is gonna be varied for sure. A good portion will end up gravitating towards Izuku because of his honesty, bravery and "manliness" that Eijiro and Tetsu like saying. Some might become a little afraid of him, others are gonna be jealous (most from the perverted group) and only a few are gonna hate/dislike him. (Shoto and Katsuki are a given, but still debating on Neito, Togaru and a few others). 
            
            Things are gonna start changing for Izuku really quickly regarding certain things and he's gonna have to adapt quickly as well. 
            
            Anyways, how are things with you? Are you in India yet or about to go and how long you going for? Going alone, with friends or family? Hope all is well with ya buddy, that you enjoy your trip and you have a safe trip.
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krispypencil

Hey how’s it going I just wanted to check in and ask about how the next chapter is going, I hope you’re enjoying the summer and taking it easy. Mha season 7 dropping so that’ll be something to look forward to, but the cannon stuff doesn’t do it too much for me since the world somehow feels more alive in your fic. You’re easily my favourite fanfic author so I’m always looking forward to the next chapter,  hope you’re getting plenty of rest and relaxation. Have a good one 

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Yeah, I'm glad too caus enough I can relax a bit. 
            
            There's some shows I'm looking forward to but really wanna see Deadpool and Wolverine along with Despicable Me 4. 
            
            Thanks dude and it should be soon
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krispypencil

I’m glad it’s going well, and I’m happy to hear that your work has become more manageable. As for mha my expectations aren’t especially high. I’m expecting more out of konosuba at this point. I hope you get plenty of rest and have a lot of fun this summer. Looking forward to the next chapter as always. 
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silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey dude, good to hear from ya! 
            
            I'm doing alright and I hope you're doing well too. 
            
            Yeah, I heard and I'm kinda looking forward to it. But like you said, knowing what's coming, it's making me not want to see it. I probably still will, just so I can get ideas I guess. 
            
            Thank you and I truly appreciate the compliments and support.
            
            The writing is coming along pretty well. I just had a bit of a roadblock because I was having a hard time choosing a path. I had multiple plans/ideas for the whole Eri/Izuku dorm thing that I was having a hard time picking a path. I was trying to see which path would allow for the most story building and character interactions that makes sense, so that cost me some time. 
            
            But I did pick one in the end and it's been easier to write now. Another thing that made me lose some time was because of my job. I had to work 6 days a week, from 10 to 8 everyday, so I was really tired and not able to focus much. Good news is that it was temporary and I'm back to 5 days a week, 11 to 7. 
            
            I've been on a good writing sessions so I'm about 50% done. The rest should be done within a week or so. And the next few chapters I have some of it outlined already so they ones coming up after this one shouldn't take too long. 
            
            Thanks again man and same to you! Hope all is well, that I hear from ya again soon and take care!
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MadAssDragon

Hey dude, it's Dragon from FF. Not sure if there's a DM function on here or if this is it. Let me know if there is. Just to let you know, I sent a message a while ago on FF and it probably hasn't told you. Would appreciate a quick, "hey I'm alright, just busy" so I know you're OK.
          
          Until next time.

silentplayermc03

@MadAssDragon Hey dude, how's it going? 
            
            My bad man. Half the time I don't get the notifications from FF and I'm still getting those stupid "make sure to add FF.email to your contacts" on my account. But I saw this one so that's good I guess. 
            
            I'll check out your message this weekend and reply back to ya. Again, my bad. 
            
            I'm alright too, thanks buddy for checking in. How about you? All good? How's the construction and job going? Family doing well? I hope so buddy and I'd like to know that you're doing well too. 
            
            Also, I'm still learning Wattpad  and AO3 so I guess? There's probably a more private conversation way but we'll figure it out. haha
            
            Take care and till next time!
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krispypencil

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Hey I read the latest chapter on Patreon but I wanted to let it sit for a while before I brought my thoughts to you. 
          As always it was a great chapter and went down a few avenues I wasn't expecting. I was kinda hoping to see them get to the dorms and see some slice of life stuff but I assume that's when the whole living situation with eri thing will be brought up and I know thats gonna blow up as a whole thing both with the guys and girls. Watching these consequences enacted as they should have been was surreal and really drives home in the cannon just how they don't give a fuck or more specifically how the author doesn't give a fuck, the premier hero school of the nation allowing that kind of behaviour on the basis of ' he has potential' is crazy. The original just seems so out of touch with reality ( yeah I see the irony in saying this lacks touch with reality) and in comparison to your fanfic and the detail you go into regarding the characters and their thoughts, personalities and past experiences makes the canon look like an amateur fanfiction off of ff.net or ao3.
          
          The meeting with bakugo's parents was something that I'd assumed would happen behind the scenes so seeing you play it out and give it its own place was a great surprise as well as you giving attention to the fact that he somehow has a clean record. Seeing Nezu unravel that rabbit hole will be interesting to say the least. As far as Izuku goes I think he's perfectly balanced in this, he may get flustered occasionally and have to consciously remind himself of his therapy and social training but he's generally pretty good in these situations and watching him stand up to bakugo was done perfectly considering that this izuku has been in training and self reflection for the past 2 years.
          Some separate points I wanted to raise include Kaminari and his crush on Jirou, I think you got him down pretty perfectly.

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Izuku's doing much better in confronting his long time bully while keeping his insecurities hidden. And like I said before, the actual showdown between Izuku and Katsuki is gonna be crazy and it'll mark the true turning point for both of them. I'm gonna do things differently than most others which I believe will still make sense cause of who they are at their core. And how I think things should've gone. 
            
            Yeah, Blackwhip was a teaser for the classmates and it's already making them make assumptions about Izuku. He's gonna have to explain it and he does have a good explaination ready to go for it and maybe he's other quirks. 
            
            Eijiro and Mina's is on the mend and that's good because they do make a good couple in all honesty. For this story, at least in the first half, their relationship is gonna be a little all over the place and it's gonna involve Izuku for sure. And I think I have a good plan for it and it'll make sense with how each of them are at the core. Now, whether it works out for Mina/Eijiro or for Mina/Izuku, I don't want to say more since it'll spoil things. 
            
            Well, Recovery Girl's comment was more that she hopes they all end up happy in the end, that it works out for each of them. Doesn't necessarily mean it'll be harem route but that at the end, they'll be content. Though, if it does go harem route, like I did for "Blue Spirit" (which I'm still editing and working on to make it better), the harem will be done tastefully. 
            
            Oh man, I have so many plans/ideas for the UA dorms and 1A/1B doing stuff together. It's gonna be fun. 
            
            Heh, she does, doesn't she? All Yui had to do was help feed Izuku. lol
            
            Good to hear buddy and I'm working on it right now. I have a few ideas of how i want things to go already so it won't take too long. I'm shooting for 2-3 week posting schedules, and I'll be posting on a Friday/Saturday. 
            
            Hope all is well with  ya and to hear from ya again. Take care buddy!
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silentplayermc03

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@krispypencil Hey buddy, good to hear from ya. I gotcha dude. Had a bad flu and couldn't go online past few days myself so no biggie. 
            
            Glad you liked it. I wanted to get into the UA dorms but figured it would've been too long of a chapter and flow would've been off. You're right cause I decided to just focus on this stuff first before going into the dorm related things since it'll be a lot of stuff. Living together, Eri, how guys/girls react, etc. 
            
            Thank you for the praise. I do appreciate it. I do my best to do that cause there's a lot of content to explore. And I agree with you said about that. The canon stuff makes it seem like no one cares just cause "has potential" which is bullshit. A learning institute whose main focus is getting their students to become future pro heroes...NOT stopping/punishing villainous behavior from said students is stupid. Even so, you got that right with the irony haha
            
            I was thinking that first but wanted to show how Mitsuki reacted to learning everything first hand. How it's gonna make her take certain actions in the future regarding her friendship with Inko, dealing with Katsuki, etc. 
            
            Oh yes, Nezu is definitely gonna unravel that clusterfuck and it's gonna be fun. 
            
            Thanks man. I wanted to show how Izuku's training with his mentors, not just physical stuff, but social stuff thanks to Nemuri and therapy with Natasha, has helped him mature and get over some of his bad habits. He's still working on them but he's getting better. It's a more realistic take on his development since it's not "sudden". Oh and the actual showdown between Izuku and Katsuki is gonna be insane (at least in my head)
            
            Denki's a cool character. He's got a cool quirk but he's lazy/perverted/dimwitted. Wanted to show him wrestling within himself about his growing feelings for Kyoka and his jealousy of Izuku. There's definitely gonna be some issues between the two, with some passive stuff too. I have plans for their interactions and it'll be fun.
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krispypencil

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in the cannon he's basically the class slacker so from that standpoint his jealousy makes perfect sense, he feels inferior to someone smarter, stronger and nicer than him and he's determined to undermine izuku and his pettiness is rising, its simple yet extremely effective and most importantly it actually makes sense given their character profiles and personalities, so this dynamic will be interesting to watch unfold as Im sure Chadzuku won't stand for that shit and will shut denki down, I know denki and jiro are shipped alot but the way he is right now makes me hope he fails which makes me feel like you did a good job at setting up whatever dynamic there will be between them. Besides I think there's far more potential in Jiro and deku and they just make more sense.
             Confrontation with bakugo it was great seeing him shut it down immediately instead of trying too hard to give him a chance, now Im just waiting for the day deku goes to calling him bakugo and not that nickname I think that will completely free deku from bakugo but of course no need to rush that kind of thing, seeing him use blackwhip was a treat too and their reactions to it as well. 
            It was also nice to see kirishima and ashido start patching things up, I don't know anything about how they'd work as a couple so I'll refrain from commenting on that part of it.
            Recovery girl's comment on hoping it works out for 'all of them' makes me wonder whether this will go in a harem direction which I wouldn't mind so long as its handled tastefully.
            I am looking forward to the joined living situation with 1A and 1B. Im absolutely in love with how involved 1B is here and Im looking forward to see how kendo interacts with deku and could definitely see some chemistry there. Momo seems like she might be centre stage at the moment. But all Yui needed was one chapter to be best girl of the fic, Kodai is def my favourite and followed by kendo and momo so Im excited to see what happens with them along with the rest of 1B
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krispypencil

Hey it’s been a minute and wondering how you’re doing and how the next chapter is coming along. I’ll be so real that last chapter has me rooting for yui more than anyone but we’ll see how it goes hope you’re doing well 

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Happy to hear that you're doing well buddy. 
            
            You're right; the characters don't really get too much actual development. It's just a handful of viewpoints and the rest are just there. Even with the 'relationships' shown, it's not much at all. No real connections. Those are some of the things I'm trying to change with this story. 
            
            Thank you man. Seriously. I really do appreciate the praise and the faith you have in my writing ability. Makes me want to try and make the story even better than what I wanted. And I know that there are other stories that are so well written, better than mine, that shows how talented their writers are. I'm aiming to reach their level and one day, God willing, I hope to do so. 
            
            Again, thank you. And I placed an update on Patreon but to tell you directly, I've changed up some things in my personal life so I'm gonna be able to write more. By the end of May 2024, some of the things that I'm working on will be done by that time and that will hopefully enable me to focus more on my writing goals/dreams. 
            
            Thanks for being patient, the praise, support and everything else buddy. I really do appreciate it. Hope all is well with you and to hear from ya again. Take care!
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krispypencil

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I’m doing good man, hoping things are looking good still, lookin forward to the new chapter I’ve read the latest one around 4 or 5 times now. I’ve rewatched some early mha episodes which made me appreciate and fall in love with your fic all over again. With the exception of uraraka, Lida and todoroki no one in class A or B is friends with Izuku; the personal relationships aren’t being fleshed out at all. I feel like they could swap midoriya for just about any character and shit would still pan out the same. It’s why I love your fic so much, seeing these characters have their own thoughts about each other and big event in ways that relate to their character tropes and personalities is something the show and manga miss but your fic does such a good job. I’ve said it before but when they were making the anime they shoulda let YOU cook 
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silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey buddy, been doing alright, thanks. Had some things come up that I had to take care of. How are things with you? 
            
            Haha, nice. Yui is a cool character and I wanted to give her more spotlight here and there. 
            
            I've been working on it whenever I can thanks to some things that popped up that I had to take care of. Thankfully, I was able to finish them up earlier today and now I can fully focus on writing. I'm about halfway done but with more free time I should be done within a week or so if all goes well.
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krispypencil

Read the latest chapter and it was great. Reunions were emotional and fun. Wasnt expecting shoto to go after him like that. Before that tho I’d like to say that the clear winner of the chapter was kodai as she got to feed Izuku, as for Izuku he’s a winner for that too but just not as much because he has shoto and bakugou to deal with, in other words kodai was an absolute goat and helped him catch a break but my guy still got work to do.
          
          Lida’s interaction was short and sweet, it didn’t make sense to me as to how they became friends so quickly. So giving him limited time in this chapter was a good call imo. The best part was izuku’s response as it really sets this iteration apart from the canon and shows that he really has grown.
          
          Another case of this was ochako. She showed great maturity in the touching moment between her and momo. One thing that left a bad taste in my mouth is how ochako asked momo to keep Izuku out her business knowing full well that Izuku could be a great help, her good intentions are understandable but she’s barely held a full conversation with the guy and here she is making choices on his behalf that affect him and it lines up quite nicely with her decision in the canon to push her feelings away for the sake of his progress in becoming a hero, it’s not exactly the same thing but at least somewhat similar in that she’s making a choice for the sake of HIS career. 
          
          But it was a great callback to her canon choice of keeping her feelings away for him out of respect for his hero career. All in all this chapter was handled well and tastefully and despite the struggle you went through it resulted in a quality chapter. Looking forward to the next one (any eta on that?) have a good one 

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey, how's it going? I'm glad you liked it. 
            
            Shoto's getting pretty impatient huh? Wanted to show how his father leaning on him now is making him be more aggressive. Gonna cause problems and there's more coming. 
            
            Yui definitely got points didn't she? Wanted to do things a bit differently with her compared to other stories I saw. Silent but caring and thoughtful. Izuku will be lucky if things continue with her but he does have work to do. 
            
            I never understood that either. Iida's alright, but it seemed their friendship was hastily put and kinda one sided. For this story, I don't want him to be one of Izuku's "main" best friends.  Not yet and even as the story goes on, he'll stay just good friend. Got that right too. Izuku's reply changed things up and portrayed how he changed in just two years.
            
            That did worry me a bit. Ochaco's conversation with Momo. I knew some people might not like it, but it wasn't a "demand" but more of a "request". And she did say it kindly, gave her reasons why. Whether Izuku can or can't help isn't the thought process for Ochaco. More of she doesn't want him get hurt like that again but knows how he is thanks to what others told her, like Natasha and what she's seen herself. That he'll knowingly throw himself into danger if there's even a chance to help someone out. And she saw how angry Shoto looked and worrying. Plus, she thinks that since Momo probably cares for Izuku too, that she'll try to keep him out of it as well. And I wasn't planning on it being a callback but after I wrote it, I did realize that it could be seen that way. 
            
            Thanks man, I really appreciate that. It took many rewrites with deletes, cut outs and rearranging things to get it better. The scene with Ochaco and Momo was actually the last thing I put in the chapter because I felt something was missing and it finally hit me. 
            
            Nothing yet. But hopefully it'll be soon since I started on the outline already. Hope all is well and I hear from ya again soon.
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krispypencil

hey how's it going hope writing isn't giving you too much grief, was a little bit worried that you might be overdoing it after the patreon update but hope you're hanging in there regarding the chapter, taking a break is always an option if it gets too much just keep that in mind. That said hope you've been having a decent time with writing the next chapter and I hope it'll get easier from here on out.

krispypencil

@silentplayermc03 Im absolutely looking forward to this. Can't wait! Hoping to see it soon
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silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey buddy, how's it going? 
            
            Thanks for the support man. Means a lot and I appreciate it. 
            
            Not gonna lie, the next chapter had me stumped for a long time. But, I finally found something that works so I've started writing and sticking with it. I'm planning to post it within a week, so we'll see.
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krispypencil

Hey it’s been a bit been wondering how you doing and how the chapter Is coming along and whether I can get an eta , sorry if I’m being annoying by checking in, I’m excited by this chapter coming out. I’ve been keeping busy actually jumped back into Warframe after years using a new account. And I check out some nice slice of life high school anime but other than that I’m looking forward to this chapter 

silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Thanks buddy for the support and confidence.  Means a lot to me. 
            
            You should. It's challenging but in a good way. But be prepared to lose a lot. lol 
            Yeah, I try to as much as I can, since my parents are elderly (over 70 years old). I'm not too close with my other relatives, cause they're a little....extra in some regards. So, ya, I'm closer with my friends like yourself. 
            
            Thanks buddy and hope all is well with you.
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krispypencil

Sorry to hear about the struggles, rooting for you and I have faith that it’ll be great so take all the time you need.
            
            I’ve seen dead cells on gamepass and have been meaning to try it out, it looks pretty good. Also nice to hear that you are taking the time to relax with your family, I’m not all that close with mine so I mainly invite friends to outings.
            
            Wishing you luck on the new chapter and hoping things are going great for you, have a good one 
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silentplayermc03

@krispypencil Hey dude, how's it going? I've been doing alright, thanks. 
            
            No worries dude, not annoying at all. I'm gonna be honest with ya, this next chapter is kicking my butt man. I've rewritten things like five times already after writing almost 10 pages each time. I haven't deleted things but taken parts/scenes out and even rewrote whole sections. Trying to get the proper flow and get the necessary scenes with certain characters fleshed out right. There's a lot of stuff that needs to be addressed/shown so I'm trying to find that nice balance. And I don't know how long it's gonna be in the end so I may have to split things like I mentioned before but I won't know till I'm finally done with it. 
            
            Nice dude! I've been playing Palworld, Dead Cells and Bloodborne whenever I get a chance (which is when I can't think at all, haha). I'm waiting for the new Godzilla X Kong movie to come out so I can go watch with family. I've also been watching Solo Leveling after reading the books. That's basically what I've been doing so far. 
            
            I appreciate the patience and support so thank you. I am trying my best to get it done right (at least in my eyes) and hopefully I can get the next chapter out soon.
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