Manawaring_singkit
silenttemptress_
@Manawaring_singkit hiiii. my apologies. will start reading, voting, and commenting your story later this evening. brownout kahaponhuhu. walang wifi༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
silenttemptress_
rezlynnnn
Hello, are you looking for V4V? ❤️
Vote my story from bottom to top, then drop your link so I can vote yours too.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/407403526
rezlynnnn
@ silenttemptress_ my account got limited. can i vote again after a few hours? i’m really sorry
b1ueberrycheesecake
Yo, emp! Done voting na pala yung sayo before so tinuloy ko na lang yung iba na hindi pa. Id appreciate if you could check my story FARRAHDISE MANSION too :* Thank youuuu!
silenttemptress_
2k reads in less than 2 months?! ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
honestly, i still can't believe that Sin Feels Better With You reached this far in such a short time, sinful angels. from random ideas at 2am, plot block moments, and me disappearing for a while because my brain suddenly refused to cooperate huhu -- here parin us.
thank you for staying patient with me and for loving this messy little world i created. more chaos, tension, emotions, and questionable decisions soon!
with love,
your emotionally unstable author
TriciaSy
@silenttemptress_ Hi! I just want to give a summarized comment, feedback, and critique for your story from Chapter 1 to 22. First of all, I want to say that I really read and finished your whole story from start to end. Actually, I am not good at giving feedback and I am not an expert in writing stories, so everything I say here is just based on my experience and what I felt as a reader while reading your work. As a fellow writer, I know how hard and heavy it is to create a story, so I really admire everything you did and the hard work and dedication you put into this. First of all, the whole story is really beautiful! There are so many great parts that really stayed in my mind. I really liked the chemistry between Isabella and De Valois—their arguments, the way they look at each other, the tension, and all the sweet/romantic moments. It feels so real, you can really feel their emotions like you are actually there. I also found it funny that Isabella calls De Valois the "Funeral Guy". There are so many other names she could call him, but that is what she chose. Though, it really fits his attitude sometimes because he is serious, grumpy, and always looks sad . Another one of my favorites was the flashback scenes of Mateo and Isabella when they were kids—it was so cute. It really is different when children make promises; their words are so pure and true. I also liked how you showed Isabella’s bravery and intelligence as the story went on, especially during her confrontation with Sharmaine. That part was intense! There I really saw Isabella’s growth and strength. She is no longer the weak and scared girl we knew in the beginning. You are also really good at adding mystery. There are so many secrets about who Isabella really is and who De Valois truly is. Sometimes it is confusing and messy, but it is good because it makes us excited and curious to know the truth behind everything.
silenttemptress_
@TriciaSy Oh my god! Thank you so, so much for this heartfelt feedback. Huhu, nakakataba naman ng puso habang binabasa ko 'to. I always keep reminding myself to write for myself and not for the world, that's my ultimate motivation to keep going. But reading your words? It completely ignited the fire inside me to do more! I’ll definitely take your words and recommendations into account, and I’ll surely apply your tips to my writing. I love youuuu. Thank you very much, witty author! Keep doing an amazing job. Susubaybayan ko ang story nina Xander and Sandra. P.S. Akin na lang po si Laurence, paki-baril na rin po si Monique. Gigil niya ako, hahahahahahaha!
TriciaSy
Overall, I felt so many things while reading. Sometimes I felt so kilig/giddy, sometimes I got really mad at the characters, sometimes I cried because of painful events, sometimes I laughed at funny lines, and sometimes I was confused by all the secrets. But all the time, I never got bored. You are really good at controlling and moving the readers' emotions. You are also great at creating characters that feel alive and like real people—they have good and bad sides, strengths and weaknesses, mistakes and growth. Even if there are annoying or confusing parts, those are really needed to make the story better, more realistic, and deeper.
I just want to tell you—do not stop writing. You have such a great talent, and I can see how much you love and value your story and characters. I know it is not easy to create a story this big, especially when you are going through things, but in every chapter and every word you made, you prove how talented and unique you are. There are many of us still waiting and hoping for your future works and the continuation of "Sin Feels Better With You". I believe you will only get better, grow more, and become successful in this field. Just continue what you started, because the story you are building is very important and beautiful to us. Good luck always, and we are here to support you until the end! ❤️
I just want to share this with you, because this is what keeps me motivated whenever I write:
"Remember: Your story has nothing wrong with it. You can never please everyone, and that is fine. It is simply waiting for the right readers—the ones meant to love every part of it."
TriciaSy
But of course, as a reader, there are parts that were annoying, sad, or confusing to me. There were some parts where I got confused and I had to read a few lines again to understand what was going on, but once I got it, it was worth it. What really annoyed me was how stupid Isabella is when it comes to her ex-boyfriend, Miguel. Seriously, she really lent 1 BILLION pesos to that guy who already cheated on her before? That was really dumb of her! And then she even agreed to let that Sydney girl stay in her condo when she visits Paris, just because Miguel asked her? She is so gullible and really stupid when it comes to that man. Until now, I still cannot get over that part. I hope she changes and becomes smarter regarding this matter, not just in other parts of her life. I also found Camille annoying before. She acts so high and mighty even though she is just a maid. But in Chapter 20, she apologized and explained why she acted that way before, so I understood her and my annoyance went away. Sometimes De Valois’s attitude is also sad and annoying. Sometimes he is so kind, loving, and caring, then suddenly he becomes cold, grumpy, and heartless—especially when Sharmaine arrived and he chose her over Isabella. That really annoyed me too, but I know he has his reasons and is just hiding pain inside. There were times I got confused because of so many names and family connections, but I understand that this is part of building a deep and meaningful story.
hershadowww
1k readsss kanaaaaaa uha! uha!
silenttemptress_
Greeting you with a little darkness today.
A friend was recently ranting about the 'follow/unfollow' drama and fake voting tasks. Honestly, if you only care about your own growth at the expense of others, just know that Saint Peter has a special Death Note for that kind of energy.
Just to be clear lang ha,I’m not calling anyone out on my behalf. Even if your interactions with me are fake, wala po talaga akong pakialam. I refuse to stress myself out over something orrr someone that isn't worth my while. Huehue! Sori sori. Pero fr, let’s ditch the insecurity and keep it real mga lola ko. Lord loves us all, but He definitely loves a sincere writer more. Shot puno sa mga totoo diyan! May you meet people as genuine as you are! Love you all!
Malaking eyebags,
silenttemptress
silenttemptress_
Anyway, back to my sins (and my story). Plot holes are the only thing I have time to fix today, not fake friendships. Ouch!
silenttemptress_
Hark! 'Tis a moment of most joyous revelry, Sinful Angels! Officially back from the writing dead. Akala ko walang magbabasa, pero alasssss, Sin Feels Better With You just hit 700 reads in less than a month. To some, that’s a small number, but for a writer who deleted two seasons of work just to escape the great loophole disaster, this feels like a standing ovation. I’m still figuring out my niche, but I’m definitely having more fun this time around.
Infamously Yours,
silenttemptress
silenttemptress_
UD! UD! UD!
silenttemptress_
Witching hour na pala huehue!
Two new chapters of Sin Feels Better With You are now available for your inspection. I have provided the drama; the insomnia is entirely your own responsibility. Do enjoy, my darlings—it would be terribly gauche not to.
Yours in late-night musings,
silenttemptress