wannabe_a_writer

I'm sorry you didn't like the ending to my story. I was just trying to display how sometimes it doesn't work out and not everything is a happy ending. But I hope you liked the rest of the story. ❤

silverfloatingcloud

 great work
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silverfloatingcloud

But overall leaving aside the ending I enjoyed the story
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silverfloatingcloud

@riverdale_0007  yh I like the story its great but I wondered if u actually remember that she gave her first time to him  and she was just 14/15 if this was going to end this way then I think u shouldn't hv let it happen just saying cause I hv this habit of putting my self in the main character shoes and be honest with ur self u wouldn't like dat either
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Serena_Loyal_Otaku

A start has 5 ends
          A square has 4 ends
          A triangle has 3 ends
          A line has 2 ends 
          
          But the circle of our friendship has no ends,
          send this to all your friends (including me, if I'm one).
          
          If you get 5 back, your a good friend.
          If you get 10 back, your popular.
          If you get 15 back, I'M JEALOUS!

silverfloatingcloud

@Serena_Loyal_Otaku 
            A start has 5 ends
            A square has 4 ends
            A triangle has 3 ends
            A line has 2 ends 
            
            But the circle of our friendship has no ends,
            send this to all your friends (including me, if I'm one).
            
            If you get 5 back, your a good friend.
            If you get 10 back, your popular.
            If you get 15 back, I'M JEALOUS!
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Miaka_hime

A start has 5 ends
          A square has 4 ends
          A triangle has 3 ends
          A line has 2 ends
          
          But the circle of our friendship has no ends, send this to all your friends (including me, if I'm one).
          
          If you get 5 back, your a good friend.
          If you get 10 back, your popular.
          If you get 15 back, I'M JEALOUS!

silverfloatingcloud

@Miaka_hime 
            
            A start has 5 ends
            A square has 4 ends
            A triangle has 3 ends
            A line has 2 ends 
            
            But the circle of our friendship has no ends,
            send this to all your friends (including me, if I'm one).
            
            If you get 5 back, your a good friend.
            If you get 10 back, your popular.
            If you get 15 back, I'M JEALOUS!
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