silverspider

Read the edited version of Chapter 3 of (Reconstructing) Sharing A Damaged Memory:  
          	http://www.wattpad.com/6160495-reconstructing-sharing-a-damaged-memory-chapter-3
          	
          	Have a good day! : )

silverspider

300 votes called for some changes in the profile.(That’s my way of making you check my profile). I changed my profile pic for the first time and I feel…liberated(I don’t know why!).
          
          Anyway, thank you everyone who voted for SADM. Here’s the thing: I am reconstructing the story. Why am I doing that? Well, there are tons of reasons. Some of them are:
          1. The original version is immaturely written, filled with errors and absolutely annoying.
          2.There isn’t enough Edward time; not as much as I would have liked anyway.
          3.The plot is lousy, disconnected and feels rushed now that I am reading it a year later.
          
          I hope you like my new idea because reconstructing will take a lot of time and patience, not only mine but also for those who decide to go through the whole journey again. But there’s a catch- there will be new chapters and I will rewrite the ending more gracefully. So, yay or nay? And if you want to become my editor, feel free to contact because I am hopeless.
          
          Thank you for taking out the time to read this. I don’t care if you are thinking, “She really thinks we’ll go through that torture again?” or “She’s a little pathetic but we’ll give her another chance.”…I’ll still adore you!
          
          And this is the edited version of Chapter 1: http://www.wattpad.com/6045144-sharing-a-damaged-memory-chapter-1. Don’t read the others. :D

vanities

Omg, yay :D 
            SADM is one of my top 3 favourite books on Wattpad and I'd love to see what it could be with some editing. (I hope that doesn't sound mean or anything D:) It was amazing when I read it the first time, so the second draft will make it even more epic.
            
            I'd love to help you with the editing in whatever ways I can, if you ever need help!
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yarncat

@silverspider Sounds good! Anytime :)
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silverspider

@yarncat Thank you for your honesty. I thought I would just edit it but then I started and wanted to change lots of things so basically there are going to be new characters and definitely more content. Thank you so much again.:D
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silverspider

Thank you so much for asking. That's incredibly sweet! And yes, i am completely re-writing SADM(i don't know if you have read that. if you haven't then don't just yet, i'll keep sending links.) And I am also going to start working on The Pride Club. 
          Anyway, i hope you are well. Good day. : )

silverspider

hey SADM fans, *drumroll*- I am reconstructing SADM!
          
          If you care keep reading else roll your eyes, think "Silverspider is soo pathetic" and move on.
          
          Yeah, back to everyone who cares (Thanks for caring),
          I have officially begun editing SADM. Yes, some of you can sigh and think, "She has finally got to know how bad her writing is!". To everyone, who read my story and never bothered to vote or comment, take a second look(of just the first chapter, nothing else has been edited.).
          
          To everyone who did vote, like I mentioned earlier I am reconstructing the story. It will take a lot of effort, time and patience not only from me but also from you lovely guys.Reconstructing means, as you already know,new chapters, new and more exciting stuff. I had wanted to enter SADM in the 'Short Story' section of Watty Awards(which I couldn't anyway) and that's why I had restrictions to consider. But now I am free to do whatever I want. So, I am thinking of some more Edward time, because he has very limited appearance in the original version and I don't like that. Anyway, this is like a project for me and I need your wholehearted support because when I delete a few chapters, the votes with that corresponding chapter will also go. Help me make that up? *puppy dog eyes* 
          
          Thank you for taking the time out to read this. Write back if you think this is a great idea, or if you want to become my editor because you feel sorry for me. 
          
          Once again, thank you. I adore you all.<3
          
          There you go with the edited chapter 1-http://www.wattpad.com/6045144-sharing-a-damaged-memory-chapter-1#.Ui3mzDZHLDw
          
          Bye! :D