harleys_workshop
Heyy! Ty for your feedback on chapter 3 of Offside. You were right, lol. I had to delete your comment just cuz I was embarrassed. But I wrote that when I was just getting into hockey, so I did not know. It's all fixed and I hope you're enjoying the story! ♡
silverthunderr
all good, loving the story!! i think you mention the penalty on offside in ch9 too? anyway just trying give some feedback ☺️
