simarsimi

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome 
          
          It’s called: The Immoral Darkness
          
          Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness? 
          

Thanks for the comment, it's nice to see such inthusiasm. I already have the twelfth chapter up, so you don't have to wait for me to post the next chapter.
          
          Adeline

thanks for the comment!!! i posted some new chapters. incase your interested
          

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          Please read the first two chapters before you decide if you want to continue reading it or not :3