simpleperson123

Started writing again.... peep the new chapter haha 

Izzybella342

Hey I read your fiolee story and it seems like you have a really good start to it. But If I can suggest a few things. I would say try not to make the same mistake I have before by making things go really fast and having them imeadtly say I love you. And maybe to show things instead of just outright saying what it is. But other than that it's good and I feel like you could do some really interesting things with your story. 

simpleperson123

Thank you so much! I needed suggestions like that! 
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