I really like your work, and I hope you don’t take this the wrong way. I just wanted to make a small suggestion because the way the story is formatted is making it a little difficult to enjoy the reading experience. Almost every page has only 4–8 lines, so I have to click to the next page every 2–3 seconds. It constantly breaks the rhythm and flow of the story, especially when I’m getting immersed in a scene. I feel like writing it in proper paragraphs, with a little more content on each page, would make it much smoother and more enjoyable to read. I genuinely like your work; this is just a small suggestion because the current formatting is taking away some of the fun of the story for me. I hope you understand what I mean. ❤️
