simplybilinski

holy brand new day. holy holy omfg omfg

simplybilinski

omfg, piggybacking off of what i previously said, one thing i really wish i explored more in the first book is olivia’s habit of her “don’t do what i do but do as i say” regarding her pathological lying. like her character is about putting others before her/not wanting to burden anyone with her own issues no matter how big/small, but that is kind of glazed over as her just making the same dumbs mistakes again. ILL DO BETTER PLSSSS

simplybilinski

rereading the unknown and all i can wonder is how people just got through it? maybe it’s because im criticizing my own work and such as i am a perfectionist and everything needs fine tuning in my eyes but i cannot. bless everyone who stuck through that till the sequal, yall are goated for that fr

simplybilinski

@lilly_628 thank you so so much for leaving this message, it’s really motivating and lovely to hear!! i really hope u enjoy the sequel and i’ll do my best to keep updating! <33
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lilly_628

i’ve just finished this and have never read it before, noticed it was done in 2020 and not sure when u rewrote it but i promise u its amazing best one ive read in so long and i don’t usually read sequels but so excited to start yours love your writing and the way you changed the story for olivia’s character
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