simpp_frr

I just published Act 1 and the prologue of Anti-Social Club. Do tell me if it needs work or more could be added. I would love your feedback! 
          	Read and join the adventure of Claire Lockwood daughter of a powerful Bennett and Mayor Lockwood!
          	I hope you enjoy it guys!

simpp_frr

I just published Act 1 and the prologue of Anti-Social Club. Do tell me if it needs work or more could be added. I would love your feedback! 
          Read and join the adventure of Claire Lockwood daughter of a powerful Bennett and Mayor Lockwood!
          I hope you enjoy it guys!

LovelyBeatle

Hello Simp_o! I am currently your story 'Witch' and I love it very much! You really know how to catch your reader's attention! I would love to be able to do so! I wrote my first story, inspired by my own experience. It's an impossible love story between two soulmates, taking place on a lovely island. I would be so glad if you could give me your honest opinion and some tips to improve my writing! I can't wait to exchange with you! Thank you so much ❣️

simpp_frr

@LovelyBeatle Hello, and thank you for Reading 'Witch' it was an inspired story. I loved reading your Story about your soulmates. I am not one to do this regularly but it truly moved me. You're doing a fine job making it, but I would just add a few more details to really hook some readers in. You're doing a good Job! I hope this helps!
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