Hey um,, if you would like to leave any criticism or tips for my writing pls do so ! I'm an amateur after all and even though I have a diploma in English you can never know a language well enough, unless you were born speaking it ! In addition, if there's any weird arrangement on my chapters, glitches, typos, ect. pls point them out and I'll edit them, I want my work to be pretty and consistent <3.