simspoetry

I've posted the revised version of my poem "bad luck."
          Do let me know if you like this version better or should I make more modifications to it.
          Also another poem "fall apart" is out now. Make sure to check it out ^_^
          It's my first time writing a free verse poem,soo...hope you'll like it.
          *A song inspired me to write it :)"
          Sim~

Poem: to my grandfather 
          -We've all lost someone special, but their memories and love remain forever'.To anyone who's ever lost someone dear, may these words echo your feelings and bring comfort.
          ~Sim

Do check out my new poems, "beyond event horizon" and "bad luck".
          -just pouring out my feelings on a sheet of paper.
          Sim~

Thanks for the follow!^^