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Laidhen

Hi Fern! I see you have a sound opinions about other writer's story.  I am a new writer and  I would like to ask a favor from you. I need your opinion  about my book...  pleeease read it :) :).
             I think you can give me a sound advice I would really appreciate any opinion coming from you, whether its good or bad it will definitely help me a lot! Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/152723271-a%C3%B1o-luz-aparte-light-years-apart

DyanelKristin

Bakit nakalagay sa RL mo yung Desultory? Nakakainis. Cringe-worthy yung mga yun e. Nandidiri ako sa sarili ko pag nababasa ko yun. Lol. Pakitanggal na lamg ples. Baka sabihin nila wala kang taste. 

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@DyanelKristin Eh. Proud kasi ako sayo. Hayaan mo na. Hehe. Ang ganda kaya non. Ba't di mo ipagpatuloy? Dagdagan mo pa. Gawa ka ulit. Hihintay lang ako sa iyong update. xoxo
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