Your a great author probably even better as the years go. But then we all start young so I'll give you some advice and tips if ya don't mind Kay?
Tip 1:
Use correct spellings and vocabulary. {When your writing use the correct word in the correct spelling. Readers will get bored of your story if your writing looks bad with so many mistakes. And use better expressing words that will make the readers feel how your characters feel like} :)
Tip 2:
Don't express how your characters are wearing ALL THE TIME.
{If that happens eventually the readers will be bored of it.}
Tip 3:
Use correct language.
{Like I said before, don't use 'Am' for the word 'I'm'. That's just being a bit childish.}
Tip 4: PROOF READ BEFORE PUBLISHING A NEW CHAPTER!!!!
{Proof read well and then Triple check your mistakes. Or else people ain't gonna like it or even give it a star!"
My Advice is;
You are a very good writer. Just needs a bit of more coming out of the shell to do. Your story is very interesting. Ask me for any more important stuff to ask and I'll give a solution :D ☺️✨❤️
