Currently polishing and proofreading multiple upcoming chapters from my story, 'Thoughless Hearts' and medyo natutuwa ako kasi nasa exciting part na'ko from what I can tell. Pero parang gusto ko munang i-rework yung early chapters ko. It seems I'm losing potential readers.
I've been observing lately that my readers would stop viewing after chapters 2 or 4. And I cannot tell for sure if they dropped my book completely or if they're just keeping tabs on it, waiting for it to be finished before fully reading it. (So please let me know if you're waiting.)
And it just bothers me at times, overthinking it. It would help me a lot with my self-doubts if at least one person tells me if my early pages need reworking or if it pass the vibe. Obviously, it would be different for everyone. So, please let me know your thoughts. I'm open to all kinds of critique and commentary.
Thank you guys.