skate2847

@maryasha: its probly best not to read it cuz like you said it may change how you write ;)

xiaomage94

  HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real"
          
          Its my first time writing a story,....so please comment,fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks                        
          

SilverLove

Hey there! I was wondering if you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s two that I need some criticism on: 
          
          "A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor 
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          
          "Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural 
          Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two? 
          
          It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :) 
          
          Thank you, 
          -Silverlove