LordByron21
Wsp? You're bl novel's got a nice concept. However, I notice you don't seem American, in the sense that there were a lot of obvious spelling errors. Maybe you were rushing. Either way, they sort of distracted for seeing the actually content. Hopefully you get the time to look over your wonderful work, lol. Don't take anything I said personally, though; eat the meat and spit out the bones.
Peace!
Ethan .O.
