Hello I just read the first chapter, it's good so far, but it was weird having the dialogues with two languages, french, and English, why did you do that? + Little advice focus much more on describing the emotions of the characters to creat a mush better chemistry.
@IkramTanava Yesss!!! I’m focusing on that for the later chapter, also, the reason I put both English and French was to include my friend, Madison, because she wanted to put her home language in it as well. As for your story, I’ll be sure to read it :3