Okay, okay sue me for responding to your bargin or whatever sooooo late. But a girl's life is shitty. Anyways I have only previewed chapter one so far..... But I must say I love your writing style, it's awesome. I almost envy how you make no mistakes. Like are you some perfect barbie or anime main character. Plus that ungodly ability to hook people in. Also these character names are mind blowing . BUT (as I said still in Chapter 1) starting off was a bit confusing to me but it then it started to flow and again with the Varvar something something . Anyways if it's not a bother, I will find time to read more and give a full blown review