This_is_my_game_face
So— (after reading that dumpster fire of memes) do you have any thoughts on edits I should make to it?
How does it flow when you’re reading it? Did I include too much stuff all at once? (I know have a bad habit of doing that xD)
This_is_my_game_face
Gotcha! Thanks for the feedback, I’ll keep that in mind for future reference ^^
skullcap0__
@Hannah074088 i actually really like it! some of the events happen a bit quickly but other than that its good !!