I feel like my writing has gotten a lot better so i’m gonna go through and re write all of the chapters. You won’t have to re-read it nothing drastic is going to change, my just gonna fix the grammar and make it sound better. Also I'm gonna change Temperance's first name. I think I was on crack when I came up with Temperance Dorrance lmao. It's now going to be Lily Dorrance. I will be going through and changing it as I edit all the chapters.