skwy98

 Anyone reading my current book Secrets  at Sea I apologize, but I've recently unpublished it in order to change a few things. I plan to put the book back up again soon. Thank you for your time.

MelanieCoetzee

Hi hun
          
          So I'm just passing through to say thank you for voting and reading Whispered Kiss. I really appricate it and hope that you enjoyed it. 
          
          I saw you took down one of your books as it was your first. My advice on it is, allow it to sit for a few months to a year. Go on with new stories, learn new stuff and then rehash the story. I personally wrote one of my stories,  Betrayal, Secrets and Love when I was 16-17. I finished the entire book, posted it up here as my first book, realised it sucked, took it down and about a year and a half ago, I came across the book and I rewrote it in a new style but kept most of the plot and provided improvements. The new stuff I learned plus more expierence in my writting really helped me to make the story shine. Maybe,  it will be the same for your first story 
          
          Thank you again.  Enjoy the rest of your day.

skwy98

@midnightmvelvet  Thank you I really appreciate it.
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MelanieCoetzee

@Skyskyad98 Give it some time. Perphas it will work out later or if you scratch it, see it as a learning expierence  if you ever want advice,  through I'm no expert, your welcome to ask.
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skwy98

@midnightmvelvet oh yeah it was my second book I had tried to write a story with a strong female lead with my same disability  (I have cerebral palsy) but it just wasn't working out right
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skwy98

Attention Readers of A Tale Within the Dark
          Previous readers: As you may have noticed, I rewrote the last two chapters. I apologize for the confusion and inconvenience this may of caused. I didn't like what I'd previously done. I hope you like the changes. 
          All Readers: Any thoughts, comments, or idea's of where to take the story from here, please do tell me. I promise to give you credit.