harrypotter_nerd10
hi i saw that you followed me please read the story that im posting right now tell me if its good
skyVSreading
@harrypotter_nerd10 ok so they are not terrible. I have read worse. But I think there is room for a lot of improvements. For example in some chapters I cant realy tell what you are saying, vs what the characters are saying. Many try giving a key at the top to let ppl know. I haven't ever realy read any monster high fan fics so I didnt realy know what to expect from this. I am prolly not the best person for the job of feedback for your book.