IMPORTANT NOTICE: I found my password to my account after a year and read through my stories, I was absolutely mortified at how horrible the mistakes were, the shortness of each paragraph and just everything except the storyline...but even that's dodgy. I am redoing Both stories and both drafted ones that will be published completed. I am truly sorry to anyone who has read these, I myself am ashamed and know that I can do a lot better now Im a year older - 21/12/16 merry Christmas