Listen, you need a lot of work on your writing.
You need periods, commons, and a whole truck loud of question marks!
Umm.. your sentences don't flow very well. Everything's happening WAY to fast and it's not very good. Tbh it sucks. But if you ever need help just In box me and I'm there. Trust me, you need a whole lot of work!!
Not being mean, being honest.
Hope to hear from you. Bye xoxo