@skylinevx - Hey author! I just finished reading Fast Line and I absolutely love it. First off, the cover is amazing — I couldn’t help but recognize Nina Dobrev as Elena Gilbert from The Vampire Diaries, which I loved instantly.
I really appreciate how you followed the overall plot of the movies but still made the story your own by adding so much originality. The way you describe the emotions between Brian and Lena as they navigate their relationship is beautiful. I still can’t believe they’re getting married and having a baby — I’m so excited to see them in that phase of their lives.
I also love that since you’re putting your own spin on the story, you gave some of the lines from other characters to Lena. It’s such a refreshing change and makes the story flow in a new, interesting direction. Making Letty her sister was such a great choice, and I really loved the sibling bond with Dom, as well as the best-friend bond she has with Mia (and omg, Mia getting married too!).
The playlists for each chapter are such a nice touch — they really add to the vibe of the story. I also noticed that you’re taking the story to the eighth installment, which is exciting since most people stop at the seventh, and that’s cool too. But I was wondering — is there any chance you might consider taking it even further, all the way toward Fast X Part Two? That would be incredible to see!
Either way, I know whatever you choose will turn out amazing. I can’t wait to read more chapters as they come out!