sleDandelionheart

@OneVoiceManyChildren is trying to stop school shootings. Please raise awareness of this account and its movement. Thank you for listening.

WoFanfic1234

Hi! I’m the person who’s writing Dragons: Eclipse!
          I want to say thank you for reading my work. Could I have some constructive criticism , as I feel my writing needs improvement severely.
          Thanks!

WoFanfic1234

Oh! Thanks for reading my work, and I  know it's a little bit rushed and all, seeing as they escaped in the second chapter. I'll do that.
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sleDandelionheart

Uh... One thing you could try to do is make paragraphs. I know it is kind of hard sometimes though.
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