ashurisann

Hi!!! I really like you story, It's fun. Though there's this writing tips I watch a week ago and maybe I could share with you. (BRUH, ME GIVING ADVICE? I CAN'T EVEN GET MY GRAMMARS RIGHT.)
          
          When two characters are speaking with each other, make different or Separate paragraphs for each like:
          
          Mirabel glanced at her, “blah, blah, blah.”
          
          “Blah blah blah” She replied. Y/n smiled and left.
          
          Something like that.
          
          Don't take it the wrong way, okay? I hope it helps :D
          
          Also thx for reading my stories too<33

slhufflepuff

@ashleyymendigoria You are literally so sweet . Thanks for the tips :)
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