slytheringirlllll

So I decided on editing my Todobakudeku story. When I re-read it I was just cringing so hard. It also felt like I was skipping so many details, trying to rush the story. It's not amazing, but it's a bit better now. I also decided on changing the title of the story. I feel like it's better than the Todobakudeku x OC
          	so now it's called "just my luck"
          	I hope the edited version is a bit better than before XD

slytheringirlllll

@HillyHill0 yeah that was stupid of me not gonna lie I forgot that some people were already a little further into the story so me edited the first half made it confusing. I drafted the rest of the chapters now
          	  I’m sorry if it was weird, I wasn’t really thinking for a moment there
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HillyHill0

@slytheringirlllll I was in the middle of re-reading it and now one half was un edited and the other half is so its weird
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slytheringirlllll

So I decided on editing my Todobakudeku story. When I re-read it I was just cringing so hard. It also felt like I was skipping so many details, trying to rush the story. It's not amazing, but it's a bit better now. I also decided on changing the title of the story. I feel like it's better than the Todobakudeku x OC
          so now it's called "just my luck"
          I hope the edited version is a bit better than before XD

slytheringirlllll

@HillyHill0 yeah that was stupid of me not gonna lie I forgot that some people were already a little further into the story so me edited the first half made it confusing. I drafted the rest of the chapters now
            I’m sorry if it was weird, I wasn’t really thinking for a moment there
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HillyHill0

@slytheringirlllll I was in the middle of re-reading it and now one half was un edited and the other half is so its weird
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slytheringirlllll

I did it again
          
          
          
          I wrote a sequal to ‘second chance of love’. I know I know, I should let go of this story line but I can’t Okay! The todobakudeku story had a sequal So I feel like the shinkami one deserves one as well. 
          
          I promise after this story I’m stopping with writing stories about this universe
          
          Anywho this story is gonna be sãnda’s story. And there is gonna be a lot of drama in this story. Betrayal, rejection, bullying,.... all that stuff.
          
          Its called ‘just like my mom’
          
          So hope you’ll enjoy the story. I promise this is the last story within this universe

slytheringirlllll

So I'm kinda in a 'editing my stories' mood. I'm editing all my stories right now cause I found out I made such dumb grammar mistakes. Like the difference between 'their' and 'there'. Why did I make so many mistakes with that?! I'm an idiot. I'm just gonna blame it on English not being my first language.